Oh my gosh
this poem was so horribly sad
I'm reading a book right now
almost just like this
but this...wow I'm so sorry
I'm really speechless the poem was great
the story was good but it was terrible
It made me cry and truly question myself when I think I have problems
I am sorry for your loss and just wow...
you are amazing
this is in my favorites
5/5
kaila

That was intense.
It actually made me shiver.
An azming peace of poetry.
I love your style of writing.

Holy shit i want to cry wow kid hunny i hope this isnt your story keep up your writing your amazing <3

Sad. Very Sad and Touching.

Wow, this sent shivers all over my body as I read; beginning to end.
You are a very talented writer, good luck with everything that you write.
And may your future be bright ;)

Wow. is all I have to say. Wow, Wow, Wow, Wow, Wow.

Great writing. Fantastic writing.

Wow. is all I have to say. Wow, Wow, Wow, Wow, Wow.

Great writing. Fantastic writing.

Tragically beautiful. Made me cry thinking of an old friend.

WOW that was sad and touching hang in there girly

Omg im speechless

WOW! WHAT A GREAT WRITER U ARE! IF THIS DID HAPPEN TO YOU I AM SO SORRY AND I AM ALWAYS HERE FOR YOU IF YOU NEED TO TALK

WOW! WHAT A GREAT WRITER U ARE! IF THIS DID HAPPEN TO YOU I AM SO SORRY AND I AM ALWAYS HERE FOR YOU IF YOU NEED TO TALK

Oh my. Speechless is an understatement. Chills are worthless. This by far is one of the greatest I have heard. What an incredible writing and such a terrible touching story.
I tend to avoid long writings but this grabbed me so violently, I couldn't stop reading. Until the last line where I sit with disgust...Daddy whispers three. Beyond excellent.

I love this poem!! You did an amazing job...you are a very talented writer!!

I loved it. That was absolutely incredible

I loved it. That was absolutely incredible

I loved it. That was absolutely incredible

Your technique really makes the words come alive.

WOW, that was absolutely amazing. You have a fantastic way with words and you can really tell a deep story. Brilliant!

It literally filed my eyes with tears ... Now adays its a very common practice .this is amazing