Hello there! First of all I'd like to thank you for your comment! It meant a lot..Second of all I see you just recently started posting..so welcome! This poem was very well said..it showed you emotions and you stuck with your topic..I'd also like to tell you to remember to add Periods if you write it the way you did..It will be hard for the reader to read because it will be all one sentence! Great Job though and Keep up the good work!
~Chelsey~

thank you a lot and i will go through with the periods thing thanks though