Comments : Is all hope lost?

  • 18 years ago

    by mayme

    the last line is very true...the fact that you know the problems and want to fix them, tells me that you will be a great mom. nice poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by tormented

    Thanks i appriciate it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Broken

    the last line was powerful...ashley..ur gonna be a good mom...you've learned from ur mother's mistakes...u know your not gonna make them...i know you dont want to be like her, and i do know you aren't going to..u can make a change..and u do have something to give your child...duh..ur love...sometimes thats all u need...it'll be hard but i believe u can do it...keep your head up

    -merrily