this poem is hot. it seems you're consistant in making great poems.

Believe it... Men are seductive. If you don't believe me, well, that's another story. They will say anything and everything to get in your pants, then dump you like a steaming coal. Keep your eye wary for true love. Most often times it takes not only the use of your heart, but with the use of your brains also.

Poem: I seem to have created my own little moral above, but the fact remains. Your poem format is not something I disagree, but the words you used I do. Hypicritical of me to say the least, but as I have grown in writing, I've noticed if you step out of the ordinary and bedazzle your readers you'll find much greater pride in your work than if you "play it safe" with something anyone could right.