Comments : Underneath The Smile

  • 19 years ago

    by Hether

    That was pretty good keep up the writing if you ever have any problems you can email me.... 5/5 Love Always Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    this is realllllyyyyyyyyy good

  • 19 years ago

    by Vixs

    that is a beautiful poem, written very well, i no hw u feel too, weneva ur feelin alone or like u av 2 hide ur pain, dnt find sum1 2 talk 2 n if u wnt 2 talk im ere xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    excellent poem! short but it gets the emotion and the point across, wonderful write! keep up the good work!

    ~lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel

    Very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Amazing, I love it. I can really relate to this. Soo Much. Awesome work. Keep it up!!! P.S Check out my poems and comment? It would mean a lot thanks!!!