awesome poem 5/5

Great poem! The metaphors and imagery were extremely vivid. Keep up the great work and check out a few of mine sometime. See ya :-)

Why thank you!!!

Wow gr8 poem so powerful x x x

Now that is an excellent poem! Very clever!

Omg. that is so beautiful. i really love this poem. i just dont know how to explain it...its just. omg...amazing. this is just simple...wow. thats all i can say. wow...if i could, i would give this 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/5 thats how good it is.

Excellent poem, very descriptive with a lot of emotions inside. I like the imagery that you created, very unique.
Keep up
5/5 from me