Agreed. I loved the idea of the poem and it was pretty well written. The caps,however, make it sound like your angry. Lighten up and clean up the language. I can tell you have that poetry spark and your next poems are going to be great!

~mackenzie

I like this poem.. I know exactly how that feels.. 5/5.. Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

~Jessica

Ur a good writer but be careful with the anger n try to make it more explanitory