Beautiful poem it is so well formed, thanks very much for the comment!

take care

I really like this, :) nicely written.

This is out of this world. You are a wonderful writer, you made me feel like I was there watching this whole thing happen. You have something in your writing that makes you stand out. Keep up the wonderful work!

THiS iS A VERY SWEET POEM! iT REALLY SHOWS WHAT LOVE CAN MAKE YOU FEEL LiKE! GREAT JOB && THANKS FOR THE COMMENT!

-SHELBY :)