That write is extrodenary. I loved it. Very sad, but point well spoken. Great job. >3jess

Omgosh, this poem is really really good! It shows so much about how life is. Great job! Keep up the gReAt work!

That was an awsome poem! I loved it. That's how me and my mom are too. I have three brothers and a sister and sometimes I believe that if I died they would be the only ones to care. Keep up the great work! And just know all the poeple on this site would miss your lovely turthful words if you died! Your not alone!
~As Always
left_2_die

wow, im going thruogh some hard times right now and this was really touching, and true, for it being random it was great, keep it up!

ohh thats a really nice poem...i mean it's the shocking truth and thats wats so good i mean it's showing us what all them naive people dont see, and it's good 2 not hide away from the truth

your a great writer, keep it up xox and take care

that was sooooooo sad but sooooooooooooo true i loved it it made me cry 5/5 great work keep it up!!!

Omg... That poem is sooo good...
is that how u feel? or just a random thing 2 right about it... it was.. omg.. its awesome

Omg that was THE best poem I have ever read. It made me cry and really think about how many people death really eaffects, but mostly your family. That was absolutley incredible. 5/5.
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

Thanks Everyone..It Was Like A Realality Bit But A Bit made it Up..and well before Anyone Thinks Of Suicide..Rememer who Loves U..Even if Its One Person..its worth stikin round..thanks

You are such a great poet. I've hear and seen so much about you. Your like a legend. To read your poety is great. I hope your feeling better. Your sister writes well to. Great job, as usual. 5/5 = )

It was sooo goood!
I think it's funny that you say at the end of the poem
*enjoy*

that was awesome, you can write!!

She Wouldn't Have Wanted Her Nice Poetry Read
The Happy Ones Picked From A Dark Pile
She Would've Wanted Her Darkest Yet Truthful Pieces
Bunnies And Love hearts Wasn't My baby's Style
I loved this part. Such a sad poem but a great one too.~Red

WOW THIS IS A VERY EXCELLENT POEM ITS SO SAD BUT ALSO SO VERY TRUE. YOU DID A GREAT JOB!!

it was really good but sad 5/5

Wow<---that's all I have to say

all i can say is i've been reading sad and depressing poetry and i have been crying my eyes out (yours is no exception). your an unbelievable writer, you piece is so true and so touching. it made me think twice about doing something. thanks so much and great work!
hugs and lots of love,
katie

wow that was awsum i cant wait to read your next poem