i loved that poem and i cant see why it has such a low rating i voted 5/5 hope that helps

Jacs
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thnxs, i dont think much of myself as a writer, but i thought people would give it at least a 4. hmmm, i guess not. but thanx for ur vote and praise!!

*~peace and love~*

Im glad you found the will to live..whoever it is halping you hold on should feel proud...good poem

Keep up the work

I always wanted to do this!Begin and end with the same verse,and change the final line!!!Bah you did that before me:P It was very nice, emotional and direct!Great!:)

Beautifully written! I loved it! You did an amazing job! Keep it up! I have to give you a 5/5 for this one! Take Care! Brooke~

Thats really good! Actually, its great!You have a lot of talent! I gave you a 5/5!!
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