Comments : Adjusting to the dark

  • 18 years ago

    by Dianna M Tuohy

    Fantastic job, hon. 5/5 for sure! ^.^

  • 18 years ago

    by Maz

    OMG!!! Huny that poem is SO beautiful...Im stunned....in awe, WOW! I love this, you have such a powerful way with words, im absolutely gobsmacked. Please keep writing. 5/5

    Love and Hugs
    xX MAZ Xx

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    very good. some real nice imagery in there. particularly liked this stanza,
    "the spiders scurry from her reach as she moves
    howling wind echos for what seems as forever
    when the thunder comes, the walls shake an shudder
    leaving her with no safety, no cover, no shelter"

    always here,
    ellie
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    a felt that there is a whole new dimension of depth to this poem which i have not seen in your work before it is maturity wisdom in the words that you formed i had to re read it to get a proper understanding it is excellent well done 5/5 luv jen x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    fantastic with such vivid imagery. u are so talented!!!! sorry it takes me so long to comment but my favs box doesnt tell me u've written another so i forget to check! well another outstanding poem!
    take care
    xxxLoUxxx