Comments : My Beating Plea

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Aww.. I hope, with all of my heart, that you don't truly feel this way within! The poem itself was amazing; so awesome! But that's to be expected from such a great poet like yourself. :-) I'm always here if you need someone to talk to.. I know it's not the same as having someone in person, but if you ever need me, remember, I'm just an e-mail (a click) away. :-) Take care and have a great weekend!

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    When we all look for the ending of our lives, the one main question comes to my mind. Does it ever really end? If our lives simply stop and give way to our pain how is it that we remember this life we're living? That's about the time when my air passages contrict and panic at the thought that we never truly die. I wish it would be that easy, but i dont think anything in this wolrd could ever be that easy, even death. Beautiful poem.
    Much love,
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by Maisha

    Fantastic poem...keep writing...your extremely talented....