And I know that nobody can save me now
Because I realise they never could
I've spent too many nights outstretched
Wishing that they would

they could hun, and they wi.ll... you'll see :)

great poem hun :)
i love you...
xxxxx

-Oli

not very good? its amazing hun, outstanding. loved the lines

My bleeding hands are getting tired
From clinging to this last thread
For now I find I’m falling apart
Screaming alone inside my head

the idea of the thread and hands, such a perfect explanation. there will be a better day out there, you deserve those smiles. luv lu -x-x-x-x-

i think it was awesome, it flowed really well

always here,
-ellie

This is a really great poem, and it really flowed excellently. You are such an excellent writer. Great Job.