Loved it!! It has alot of emotion.. Nicely done.. Keep writing and take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

great poem I gave you 5/5

wow...thats amazing!!! so much emotion... *5* keep it up!
-xXx-

that was a hella good poem...props

Very good poem! Very good rhymes and flow. Keep it up *hugs*
Check out mine when you have time, thx. :)

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~