Comments : The First Time

  • 20 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    thats really good.. 5/5 great work.. nice word choice

  • 20 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    hey.....great poem explained it very wel.....if ya ever need to talk im always here...
    love ya,
    lisa x) *mwah*

  • 20 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Great poem hunnie! I liked it a lot. Keep up the great work!
    Love always....
    Haily
    XOXOXOXOXO

  • 20 years ago

    by AJ

    wow, great poem. Strong feelings put into it. Good job. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 20 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    wow i've been there before 2