Yes true,A lie always leads to an another lie...Beautiful poem with a beautiful message...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

Oh how true this is! Beautiful write

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

beatiful...need to bear in mind that it is not always the 'dark souls' that go to hell. Sometimes they can be nice people that are very dear to our hearts.

So true! Very beautifully written. You did an exellent job once again. I loved this poem! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

Wow, it was so cool, a pleasure to read. I like reading stuff written by "older" guys ;) I wanna see how the "grown-ups" think :D
Plz, check out some of mine when you have time, thanks *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Wonderful intense read!! After reading it twice I cannot feel that this has a completely different underlying abigious meaning.
Flow and diction flawless. Thought provoking with much visionary passion.

Your friend
Hayley

Darkness is a dangerous friend ...what is wrong with the sunlight and the warmth and where has it gone ? I love your poem Have a beutiful day in the sun , Pia

good poem loved it deep too.

Jacs
xxx

Captivating with such vivid imagery! Deep and thought provoking, I really like it! Take care~Holly