i luv it its very cute and sweet xox sam

Holly, they just keep getting better and better. totaly loved it
5/5

Dave.....

Wow! This is really nicely written. Short but sweet! I liked it, keep it up!

aww short but so romantic a bot like my uncle really. er anyway i loved it so keep up the good work xx

i like this, makes me think of when you are in a nightclub and you lock eyes with a beautiful girl across the room and you stop noticing others