Again this poem worked well, when considering it's overall length.

Keep Writing
Nici

I liked the start of this one but it was too abrupt and short for my liking...left me wanting more...you should extend it...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Short yet powerfully done. I like the way you personified darkness..really brought it to life.

[lost_laureate]

I like the imagery here. I could close my eyes and have a great image of this. :)

I liked it but thought it would been even better if you extended it still a short and sweet poem in itself