nice rhymes they all fit in how i felt before from a person that really effected me !!!

I know how you feel! I think this is my favorite poem of yours so far! I really enjoy reading your poems! Another exellent poem! Brooke~

Wow...ur poems just keep getting better as i read on...I think dis one's my fav...i can totally relate...keep it up...

p.s. ur 'pillow' luvs u *wink*

that was a great no Exclent poem....i added it to my favorites....keep up the good work.....take care homie...

this is very good and if i wasnt in the process of zoning out then id write a better comment. but i really liked this one.....5/5
~Freak~

i really wish i had your skill to be a poet. you have such amazing work and my heart skips a beat each time i read one of your poems. you have a beautiful talent and dont let anyone tell you other wise. someday someone will appreciate you for who u are. hopefully some day soon. i wish you the best of luck with everything and i hopen you have a great life. 5/5
love always
paulette

OMG this is really good but really sad sorry you feel so bad, but i can relate so i know how you feel. Its not so bad in the end it will get better some how.

I really liked the way you paint your words, the way you place the words together,I hope your pain be like Dust-passing, and your Dawn appear

Another great poem of yours....you are on my favourites! :):):)

Another excellent poem. I love reading your poems. They are always so deep, so full of emotion. And "travis" is wrong. I think he's insane. Your poems are beautiful. You're so talented. Keep writing.

-Ice

Yay! Well done on the rhyming for a start and it is also rather original which is good 2. Good work! Im a fan.

Awww, that is by far my favorite poem of yours so far.

Wow...that is very, very good.

wow i really liked this one... although all these sad poems leave me curios as to why and what made you feel this way....whatever it is....im sorry....anyway great poem...loved the ending...it is all soooo true. 5/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Amazing. intense, you can feel the emotion. brilliantly crafted piece.

WOW. This was awesome aswell!! The way you started it and ended it were really good, I loved it! I loved these lines;
"A blade to my heart was your tongue to my ears.
Every word a scar, that won't heal over years."
They were really good. Awesome job! 5/5

`taleee xx

Ooh, a old one! :) hehe.. i think your style has changed quite a lot hasn't it? oh, well, loved this, just like i love all your other poems! great write as per usual! 5/5

Man u are an awsome writter...i really love ur wk and enjoy reading it.
Jennifer