Very descriptive hun. I love it. Especially the last part - where you relate an object (being the rose with one petal) to how the person is feeling; falling. Amazing write. 5/5

Luff,
Kalah.

i loved the poem it's really sad

awwwww o m g very very sad- it made me cry~! you are truly gifted and i hope you take care...keep up tha good work! if you can i would appreciate if you could check out some of my stuff! thanx a lot~! <3 pocket~!

this is so touching! i was in tears! love it..and keep up the great work..take care! love tegan..xoxoxo

amazing bam, really really amazing, definately keep up the kick booty work, sad but really meaningful, keep up the wonderful writing. *hugs* take care bam,
~Rae

This is a very sad poem, and you manage to put your amotions into words in a very impressing way...

Some grammar mistakes, but that doesn't really matter...

It rhymes quite good, but the flow was a points ruined..

But still...great poem...

I dunno what it is, but there is something within it that makes me feel with the narrotor..

keep it up

awww the poem was great. i just didn't like the last line but the rest was fabulous. sorry for your lose.

Wow, this must be one of the saddest poems that I have ever read. Really good write, a real tear jerker.

Steve

BEAUTIFUL, it was really moving and i know how you feel, well not exactly but you'll know from my poem you read (Thanks by the way it meant alot) and i hope it isn't true and if it is I'm sorry for your loss! Great poem, one of the best 5/5