this is about the thir time ive read this poem and it gets better each time! the flow and the rhymes are all really natural and fluent. tis a very good poem. very good indeed. post more NOW!!!

heehee thanks lu! :) nowhere near as good as any of yours and DON'T deny it! :p anyway! I was thinking, this one and the poem She I originally wrote as songs which is why they have a repeated verse in them! You and Jenny can have them for your band if you want! I can't think of a tune for them so they're no good to me!

**AWESOME**

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