Comments : Quiet

  • 15 years ago

    by JussxAxNobody

    Loved it!! great job ash,. keep em comin. i see nothing but good things from you in the future

  • 15 years ago

    by John Vlight

    Great job

    even greater poet

  • 15 years ago

    by Leah

    This reminds me of when i started writing. you on the write path. keep up the writing and for better ryming words check out www.rymezone.com it helped me a lot. oo and plz comment on my poems! xox. leah