this is very...uhm... interesting. if this is true, i am very sorry. i never had a dad or a mom, i envy the fact that you actually knew your father although you seem to have more pain, while i feel lost......

Great poem...its soo heartfelt and it brings out soo much emotion...

Great poem!! It was really touching. I think that more people should know that a lot of people get killed in car accidents too young. My brother was critically injured in a car accident in November, now he is better, but his girlfriend was fatally injured, and not a whole lot of people know how this type of thing affects them until they go through it. And people in the military should also get noticed too, cuz of their service. Great poem!! Thanks for sharing!!

I love this poem, its excellant. I hope that you will write more. Its really good because I feel the same in ways

:'( thats a truely touching story, i can't imagine how u must feel, if u need to talk i'm here hugs and kisses sam

omg... tears are streaming down my face, this is so sad, yet so wonderfly written.. a 5 without a doubt

Simply superb, nothing else need be said.

Great poem !!! Full of emotion . Your so talented ... This really created a story line in my mind . I could picture every moment .Keep up the awesome poems

April~

Sad sad poem. Great poem and great twist at the end.

~*~Christina~*~

Great poem. Nothing left to say. Your an amazing writer!

Excellent writing, great job of keeping a person in the poem. 6.59 on my scale of 6.66

wow, you are such a talented writer, and i love all of your other poems!

It was just splendid!
It was full of emotions and very touching! Excellent poem!
I really enjoyed reading it.

xxx

that is one of the best poems i have ever read but it is the most saddest one as well ... i felt this one ... well written 5/5

Great ending, very strong poem that you can really feel deep inside, you did a great job! Some things you could look at; punctuation, you don't need a full stop at every line, just when it needs it as if u were reading paragraphs, secondly that you may like to punctuate when someone is speaking so you can easily know who's talking. Grammar, you missed out the second "o" on "too" in more than one place where it is needed. Besides that I found it a perfect poem with some great strength and power. I'm not surprised it’s on your heart; you have been through a lot of pain that this poem depicted very well because it was easily read and heartbreaking! Be Strong and keep your head up!

OK..ive w8ed an eternity to comment.. wen i first read this, i wasnt registered and wasnt interested, so all i cud do was vote.. then wen i did register i had 4gotten the title and cudnt look for it.. then i posted a msg in the forum askin bout it (no answer) until 2day.. so here i am.. this poem is reli sad and thats wer its beauty lies.. i hope this isnt bout sm1 u personally noe.. i loved the emotion, the rhyme, and how deep the words are.. its heartbreaking.. i love it
love ya too :D
nannoush

Blew my mind away.

I love this it has a beauty in it trust me it has
great job

It was a real pleasure to read. I like the repetition of those verses and the storyline. It was sad but great! 5/5

Okay.. im crying.. this is another amazing poem... ive read a couple of your others and just wow.. not one bad or even okay one.. they are all great.. and this is soo sad.. but it shows great emotion and is written really well.. keep up the spectacular work!