Wow! This doesn't suck at all. I love the way you used a rose. Hope everythings alright. Some great imagery in this one. Keep it up xxx

I think its cool. Never read one like that. Nice job. <33333

This poem has GREAT imagery. Keep writin.

Emma xx

PS ur in ma faves now!

this is interesting its like everything u can feel at once good job xox sam

well where ever it came from doesnt' matter because i loved it

Unloved ♥

This was a really nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Loved the last stanza. Good job! And thanks for the comments on my poetry. It meant alot:)

Thats awesome babe
great write
please comment my newest one
I haven't been writing for months so I'm getting back in the swing of writing
thanks&hearts;