I liked the 3rd and 5th stanzas the best. The second stanza with the rhyming sounded a bit forced but it's still a really sweetly-bitter poem :)
Much love,
-A

Very well written hun. I like the 5th stanza the best .. but overall the poem was deffinatley amazing, (as always) :D

Luffvoo forever hun <3
Kalah.

The result of insomnia due, in part or what not, to the loss of this individual is very well played and written about.

The idea of puddles of tears comes across very well in this piece. Love can be both exciting and wonderful. The results it can have are endless. It is always a fond interest of mine to see the 'under' results of love. That is to say the insomniacs and great upsets that the affect of love has on those individuals. Much like my own.

You do have an interesting ending - the last two stanzas. "Cries so much, That tears can't produce - Don't like Dreaming - Knowning none of it was true." The individual 'bangs' in the meter, if you will, here - are vibrant and heart pounding. Tears can easily fill eyes when you read it .... hats off to you.

5/5