Hey..Its good keep it up
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Good job, Jennifer. I liked this poem. Especially the last stanza. keep it up:) And thanks for the comments on my poems.

this poem is 3/5..you should try to express in some Strong words..you know what i mean
but maybe i understand you..my first poems were Very suck..but i hope my work will improve..and hope yours too:)
Good Luck
Nema
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it was a good poem, i liked it, yea it could use some work but in-all it was good. i'd go w/ 3/5 too. keep up the work an thx for commenting on mine