Comments : Let it Fade

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This one was good and so sad. Great work:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    Now, I have to say,the ending is not really the perfect match,it's a small poem, you need an impressive ending!

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Man your good with so few words you got an amazing and powerful poem.