Comments : Saying my goodbyes

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Powerful poem, emotionally written, I enjoyed the second stanza, and I have to say, I loved the malice in the last line "I hope she breaks your heart" brilliant, 5 stars to you, well done

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    emotional,speechless man,wow,head rush....