Comments : Pretty Picture

  • 18 years ago

    by Wolfwood

    wow. Theres much emotion in this, and you know what your talking about 5/5. Rate some of mine somethime

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    This is deep. Very good! Keep it up! Check out some of mine if you have time <3 Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WELCOME TO THE CLUB!!! I love what you wrote in the application...But you'll come to see this club is not that serious. When you want someone to be serious and give you comments, adivce, help...anything...I will and some of the others will...but we're all about fun and jokes... :)

    I don't get into self harm but I must say this is very creative. Your emotions and pain come running through to the reader. It flowed nicely and clearly stated how you feel.

    Excellent write!! Again welcome to crazy land!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    ooh nice. I dont usually read and like cutting poems. but this one has the imagery to draw me in. I've always loved poems about art, and comparing it to life. great job. keep up the good. work.

    Take Care,
    Renee