Comments : Keeping

  • 18 years ago

    by Andriana

    Aww. this one is cute. excellent write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andriana

    Aww. this one is cute. excellent write.

  • 18 years ago

    by cait

    I really like this one. its really good. you're a great writer. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    That's so cute. I love it! Great job!
    Love,
    BJ

  • 17 years ago

    by Yu Lee

    This is such a great poem..^-^

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*Sachi*~

    I love the rhyme scheme here--I could even hear a beat in my head pounding lightly in tune with it, lol. . . I may have read it differently than what you intended it to be, but I can't help that . . .
    great job, and I REALLY like this poem!