Wow, great job hun, I love this <33 It flowed real well and your rhymes are great and the whole plot and story in general was great...you're so creative and unique, and talented, and amazing, and i love you. =) <33 Never stop writing babe, you're the best xxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

ps, i hope everything's alright with you, never forget I'm here if you need someone <3 xxxx

another amazing poem I always love reading your work.. you have such talent and your work is always so different. 5
jennifer

wow that was a great poem keep writing i wud luv to read them