Wow, That was great. I know the first time i took a shower with my boyfriend, it was a night to remember. I honestly can say i acually feel this poem. Lol, Really liked it.

-Courtney

That's so romantic! It's funny when I first started reading it I thought of something so similar that I had done once. I used a blindfold I had rose petals all over the bed. Candles burning and a nice warm bubble bath! I should have wrote a poem about it. Maybe I will sometime there is so much more to it! 5/5 Well well done! Take Care! Brooke~

omg I loved it. I love the rhyming and the vocabulary and.... everything. I loved this poem. keep up the good work. Thank you for writing it.

oooOOOooo very erm... cant think of the word... hang on... *thinks* nop cant think of the word ok its so gd its undiscribable lol

nice poem u captured me by the words u used:)

Hey this is really good...keep it up

Beautiful... utterly beautiful. It's a sweet poem, definetely.
You started off a little shaky, I didn't like the wording of your first line.. but then the spiritual and emotional feelings really made this piece worthy.
You write with such devotion; a true romantic piece.
Well done, it definetely held a 'sexy' attitude ;).

really good! keep it up!

~*Ashli*~

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