Comments : My Heart Holds On

  • 18 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    Only you can set me free
    But it’s always you who buries me

    prehaps

    Only you can set me free
    But it’s always you burdening me

    I dunno...
    I just think the whole thing in general is class, but I'm not keen on the last line.

    Emma x

  • 18 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    in fact,

    you, burdening me....

    it should have a comma

    emz x