Comments : Romeo and Juliet curse

  • 18 years ago

    by -*AlLiSoN*-

    wOw...that was really good, i don't kno what else to say, but I really liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie McCullick

    Ahhhhh romeo and juliet is my favorite "a rose by any other name"....arbaon is the name of my string quartet I am in is...i play the violin...definate 5...
    Katie

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    I can't stop reading your poems now, it like a new obession.

    "Juliet, how I love thee so,
    Everyday I love thee more,
    Seeing you, my face will glow,
    Gaze all day, eyes never too sore."

    This first stanza was a bit weak, I think you could do better than this. =)

    "Life too short, condemned alone,
    Without your love I cannot exist,
    I’ll end my life, never will moan,
    For you don’t see me, I can’t be missed.'

    This was my favourite stanza, I especially adore the last line. It pulled the whole poem together.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Nice & dramamtic...i like the way u rhyme..