your wriiting is good, I llike your chose of words and how the are put, you do paint a picture

Well done holly its holly your poem is good well done xxxx

Holly thats a well good poem and if u ever need 2 tlk then tlk 2 me lol luv ya grace XxX

Nice one. Good rhymes and flow.
Plz check out mine when you get the chance, thx.
Keep writing and don't listen to those voices*hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

It will get better your not alone great write short and deep keep it up great talant and buzzing emotion loved it xxx plz comment and vote on some of mine

That was great, really describes it.