Comments : Bathing in fears

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Very good poem its very well written.

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    as i said earlier, i think tis a good poem, i pretty much said wat i thought i tink so yeh lol,
    always here,
    ellie

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    their voices seem to drift from me
    along this steadily flowing tide
    but the memories continue swimming
    in the countless tears Ive cried

    this bit especially was just so fantastic!! The imagery is so flawless and so powerful, really moved me. Wish i could give u a real hug but this'll have to do for now *****hugs******

    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    WOW agaiN! really like how u refered to water through out the poem and the lsat line like a motto is really good! well done chick hope u okay
    xxxLoUxxx