Wow.. that was AMAZING!! Great excellent job!! 5/5 all the way. The flow and rhythm and rhyme was great. Keep writing.. I'm here to read..
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Robin

wow that is really good i really like that you should keep on writing poems

That was really good. I loved that it was short...but it was right to it. I loved it!
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

This is a a great poem and a great work of art. PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE! and please check out my poems!

I love it. Short and beautiful:) It's amazing. Great job. Keep it up babe *hugs*

~Jessica

My gosh that is so incredible u r a reeli gr8 writer keep it up ur doin gr8=D