Wow so dark, each line made me want to keep reading, the end was very dark indeed. I'm scared now! :S Keep it up xxx

thank you guys sooooooo much!!!
actually, it's not about vampires, it's about beeing buried alive.

Excellently executed, Fighter. Awesome poem. I read it over a couple times, too. I like it a lot. Definitely keep up the good work. 5 for this one, of course.

Eden

Hey, Fighter, this is YOURS TRULY, ^_^ I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this one. I wish I could write poems like you. Well, I'll catch U l8er, OK? PEACE WITH SMILIES

Great work.I loved it.Thanks for your comments on mine.Keep the poems coming.Jeff

Wow, deep.
Nice one,

Failed

I simply adore the way you wrote this, so mindblowing, acctually

WOW. Mind blowing like empty space said! OOOO I love it to peices! haha thankyou for the comments I love them and YAY fav status w00t! :P keep up the brill work hun. I lovvvvve reading your stuff.

Jenn x0x0x

Nice poem