Hey this is a very good poem it shows really meaning that some people may not understand i really like it basically because it was beautifully written and because he it is so true weather certain people want to believe it or not 5/5

Well done on this short yet sweet poem. i suggest tho that you need to put this poem into paragraphs. it will make it easier to read.

5/5 david

It's great that you too have given both sides to the situation, a good poet it one who has lots of perspectives. nice name for the title. the last sentance works well being short and it effective. keep expanding you vocabulary and your well on your way to becoming an excellent poet.