Very good display of emotions through your words.
Keep writing, you have talent.
-David

I really like this poem.
it reminds me of my friend Desire".
She took her own life almost a year ago on 1-18-06.
It was and still the hardest thing i have ever had to deal with.
I miss her so much.
And no matter how much i cry or how much i wish i could have her back i know shes not coming back.
And even tho its been almost a year.
It still doesnt feel real.

but i love this poem.
great job.
keep it up.

Maria

Hey this is great keep it up! this poem reminds me of my baby cousin "little wayne"
his mom just killed him about 3 or 4 months ago, he was only 6 months at time but 21 days after he turned 7 months he died, she set him on fire.i raised the other 2 girls but i never once held him nor seen him till 2 or 3 weeks later i got pics of him. well i love this poem it kind of made me tear up really.