i liked that. It made me cry. You have a gift keep it up!!!

Great job....I absolutly love this poem!!

Good job!! Is your mom really like that? If she is, I am sorry. I hope you have more great poems to come!!

wow.....i am speechless.....that made me cry....it was raw, emotional, and full of heart.

This was a really good poem and it was really emotional. great job! plz read/comment mine. maybe they can be half as good as yours :)

that was good. very emtional, but still great.

awsome poem!!! keep up the good work!!

~Angel

This poem is so sad.My never mom tried to do that.But my heart sank for you when I read that poem.Keep strong.And good poem.

You did an amazing job on this poem! Painted the picture very well just enough detail! Such a sad and emotional piece! Keep posting! I enjoy your work! ~Brooke~

oh my god... this was so... terrifying... im so sorry if this was written from experience... but this was a really great poem and it captured your emotions really well.

WOW! YOU MADE ME CRY! GREAT POEM AND IM SORRY YOU HAD TO GO THROUGH THAT! LAST LINE HITS THE HEART! 5!