Comments : Finger Prints of Creation [My Lifes Love Pain]

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Wow. I've never ever read a poem quite like this one before. I hope you're okay.. (?)

    Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    There are two main things about this poem that i really like:

    1) how God's own finger prints stain your existence. very original and deeply thought out

    2) how you put this in the love poem section instead of the depresstion section. just seems to make it more cynically/ironically made.

    that's one main reason why i'm not a huge believer in God. many people just have the idea of Him to cling to when they need something. either strength of mind or will. not too many people focus on the teachings, just the ideal.
    wasnt insinuating anything with that last statement. just my view on things.
    very nice poem. i know i'll always enjoy reading anything you have to write.
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    yo k-rete just wanted to say that im back kinda, i posted a new piece for the first time in forever. then i saw you started posting again. well this is the first that ive read, and its really good. it makes me sad, bad its well written. well ill ttyl man.
    ~~Love and Peace~~