Written with such deep emotion. A poem like this it's hard for someone to help you improve it. It came straight from your heart! You did a great job expressing how you really feel and that is a good release. Good work! Take Care! Brooke~

Releasing the hurt and anger through writing is always a plus to me. No one can tell you how to improve a poem with so much emotion behind it; that would be like telling someone how to feel.

Good Job

--Sher