my realationship used to be like that with my mother so i can really relate to it, but a great write!

XsaraX

Beautifully written! I used to always fight with my mom. Now that I am older we get along a lot better! Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~

i in a way no what u mean, great poem

aww that poem was so sweet. im in shock. i have not read a poem about a parent that was that detailed and beautifuly written. i anjoy reading your poetry and i think you have great talent. keep up the good work
best wishes,
paulette

I think this is an okey poem...

The rhymes seem way to forces for my liking, as many of the lines are filled with quite poor English in order to make it rhyme...

It is very straight forward, and lacks something special...

Keep it up...

off to read more of yours

great poem 5.0

Im glad your mother came back to her senses...I can relate to missing a mother.....good poem I can feel ur emotion

That was really beautiful. Great job.

Love,
Tiff