thats really sad and i know what that crap feels like....

once again alot of emotion...i dont no what it feels like but if u ever just want to talk or laugh pm me:)

twas a good poem....

Good poem...

You tell the reader exactly what you want him to know...You don't have to concentrate in order to understand this one...

Perhaps somewhat simple, as I see it.

there is no constant rhyming scheme, if any at all, and it doesn't have a very obvious flow. However, many excellent poems are vert untraditional.

Keep it up!

good poem, sorry this happened, it was emotional and although the flow was different and not continuous it doesnt matter as many poems do not need to flow to be good, like enslavement said, well done and keep it up :) xxx

Hey another good poem but needs a little work on the rhyming scheme. like katie said - it doesn't matter. Nice piece though - i'll give it a 4! :)

thanks guys!!! means alot!!! xx