ur a good writer , thanx for sending meh a message n writing a comment too meh :D .. ur a really great writer chickah ..keep up the good work

Love this, thanks for the comments on my poem, i look forward to reading more of yours.
Rhys

I wish it was longer so it had a conclusion! it sound like she has a disease or somthing thats killing her and shes giving up hope... but idk.