awww, a sad poem, but i found the flow hard to read. i had to go over a few lines to understand what you were trying to say. other then that, very good

Long but a very good one

good work, i really like it is alot

I am so sorry someone is mistreating you but you wrote a great poem!
5/5
Dave.....

very sad poem i must say but ya know cristy lifes isnt full of just sadness and pain i sure hope you would be happy again like old times
take care
love
james

Tis a story that does convey a verry honest truth of dismay.

Thankyou so much for sharing what is so hard to say.

peace