Comments : As the curtain falls

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemma

    Hey lu, great poem. It is truly beautiful.
    Emma xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow i really like how the poem is in different stages so kinda like the different people she has to be....i espec liked the lines each wish she had made
    is burnt as she wakes
    in her quilted bed of black
    ....brill agen!
    take care adn keep smiling hun!
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Toni

    i read this poem a few tmes now and it still manages to take my breath away. its so powerful, i love the idea of the curtain falling, and the way the first stanza and last are repeated. Brilliant hun, absolutely brilliant, if not one of your best masterpieces so far! xxxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by colourmehappy

    This is so beautiful
    i dont remember reading it before.
    it still makes sense.
    i love you x