Comments : Painful Past.

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    wow this poem is amazin, its really good. dnt 4get im always here 4 u!! love ya loads xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Aww babe *hug* dont let him bring you down babe, and dont leave and be strong, no cutting please babe, for me
    I love you

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    this is like great! i love it is rhymes it flows its great! i totally know how you feel im gonna add you to my faves if that's alrgith cos i love the poem! keep it up and take care
    Polly ~X~

  • I like what the poem is trying to say. I’ve had something similar happen to me with a guy before
    I though the way you used your sentences made it more interesting instead of just picking words that rhyme and don’t go. Nice piece of work
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lilo

    Hunni....thats great....lil confused as to who its about though.... ben? or bill? but thats me being me! you know what im like!
    im always here for you...
    love you loads
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Calley

    this is such a sweet poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Thumbelina04

    so sad, can relate though and flows real well! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    "You told me you were always going to be there for me
    But everytime I was down you would act as if you could not see
    The pain thats growing inside of me, killing me."

    I can relate to that really well. It was a great poem. Great job!!!

    Love Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    I'm in a realtionship actually right now but i kinda feel the same i mean i know she says she loves me but i think sometimes those are really mellow words..have words lost there meaning? but u did a great job on that poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Bizarre

    I know what that feels like. It sucks right? yeah anyways, great poem. i gave it a five.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You know...not that i'm saying everyguy...but some guys are really a jerk...they do something wrong but they don't think it's wrong...hmmm...someone must point out to them...they tend to think everything that they do is never wrong...

    The message is clear and i understand...but i think you can play with the structure and the words? Kind of confusing...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's really a sad poem. Also a wonderful poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Liked the poem but i dislike blood! n cuttin your sen!! but part from that i liked it alot!! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Girl, This poem is so awesome..
    you are the best <3
    5/5