Indeed, you are correct on my poem Your Blood Was Mine :) I just read this one and I found it to be excellently written. You enabled a regular idea to have a tinge of bright color and flavor. Awesome job on this poem. And thank you for your comment :)

Eden

Good poem I like how you take us through the stages of each persons fate.

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wow! so good omg, so true i luv it... it's so emotional and deep and honest! much luv, mandie :)

Very good poem...I love how you use those two lines over and over again...

Very good message, and interessting rhyming shceme...

great job.

keep it up

I loved this poem, dear. Especially the verse about Phillip. Very nice. Keep writing!

-Ice